Can I improve my essay?

In this lesson, we are going to be learning how to improve our essays. We will be thinking about how to improve them grammatically before trying to write a ‘closing statement’ for each paragraph.

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Intro quiz - Recap from previous lesson

Before we start this lesson, let’s see what you can remember from this topic. Here’s a quick quiz!

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Q1.When did the Buddha live?

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Q2.The Buddha taught that reincarnation is painful and causes suffering.

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Q3.What type of being do Buddhists believe one has to be reborn as, in order to escape the cycle of samsara?

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Q4.The Buddha wrote all of his teachings down. True or false?

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Q5.Which of the following make up the three baskets of wisdom from the Tipitaka?

Select three (3) boxes

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Q6.Buddhists follow the Threefold Path to Enlightenment. Match the words in English to the words in Pali. (There must be a response in each row to get all three points.)
Ethics
Meditation
Wisdom

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Q7.Theravada is the youngest school of Buddhism.

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Q8.Asceticism means...

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Intro quiz - Recap from previous lesson

Before we start this lesson, let’s see what you can remember from this topic. Here’s a quick quiz!

Question 1

Question 1

Question 2

Question 3

Question 3

Question 3

Question 4

Question 5

Question 6

Question 7

Question 8

Q1.When did the Buddha live?

1/8

Q2.The Buddha taught that reincarnation is painful and causes suffering.

2/8

Q3.What type of being do Buddhists believe one has to be reborn as, in order to escape the cycle of samsara?

3/8

Q4.The Buddha wrote all of his teachings down. True or false?

4/8

Q5.Which of the following make up the three baskets of wisdom from the Tipitaka?

Select three (3) boxes

5/8

Q6.Buddhists follow the Threefold Path to Enlightenment. Match the words in English to the words in Pali. (There must be a response in each row to get all three points.)
Ethics
Meditation
Wisdom

6/8

Q7.Theravada is the youngest school of Buddhism.

7/8

Q8.Asceticism means...

8/8

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Can I improve my essay about Buddhism?

End of lesson quiz

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Q1.Which of the following require a capital letter? (Tick two to get two points.)

Select two (2) boxes

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Q2.Which of the following sentences include a fronted adverbial and therefore require a comma after the fronted adverbial? (Tick two to get 2 points.)

Select two (2) boxes

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Q3.Which of these sentences is a closing statement that links information from a paragraph about Siddhartha Gautama reaching enlightenment and another about teaching his followers.

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Can I improve my essay about Buddhism?

End of lesson quiz

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Question 3

Q1.Which of the following require a capital letter? (Tick two to get two points.)

Select two (2) boxes

1/3

Q2.Which of the following sentences include a fronted adverbial and therefore require a comma after the fronted adverbial? (Tick two to get 2 points.)

Select two (2) boxes

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Q3.Which of these sentences is a closing statement that links information from a paragraph about Siddhartha Gautama reaching enlightenment and another about teaching his followers.

3/3

Lesson summary: Can I improve my essay?

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