To edit

In this lesson, we will focus on editing and improving our writing so far, particularly focusing on the skills we have learnt in this unit. The very end of this lesson will also provide the lead-in to our next writing outcome. In this lesson, death is referred to. For some people this will be be a sensitive topic. If that applies to you, you may want to do this lesson with a trusted adult nearby who can support you.


Click on the play button to start the video. If your teacher asks you to pause the video and look at the worksheet you should:

  • Click "Close Video"
  • Click "Next" to view the activity

Your video will re-appear on the next page, and will stay paused in the right place.

Lesson summary: To edit